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The diagram below shows a possible future means of home energy production. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows a possible future means of home energy production. NexW
The picture gives us the information regarding possible future home energy production. It consists of six stages. They are compost ferments methane gas, methane gas storage, compressor, combustion engine, generator, and the final stage is the electrical energy storage. In the very first stage steel tank is required and 3/4 part is filled compost such as leaves, food, scraps etc and water is required to mix it. After mixing compost ferments the methane gas and produces a gas. Gas is passed from four pipes attach in one huge pipe and is transferred to the second stage. Second stage involves huge tank for the storage of methane. Coming to the third stage methane gas is compressed in compressor in medium sized tank. Then it is released to the fourth stage with the help of connecting pipe which is connected to all six stages. Fourth stage includes combusting engine methane gas which were compressed are put on the engine and after that it releases the mechanical energy. Next stage is the second last stage where energy which were released come to a generator and the machine release the electrical energy out then in the final stage the electricity is stored in a battery. That is the same electricity which can be used in home. Concluding in future it seems possible with only six stages and with the help of compost and water, home energies can be generated.
The picture gives us the information regarding possible future home
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energy
production. It consists of six
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stages
. They are
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compost
ferments methane
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gas
, methane
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gas
storage, compressor, combustion engine, generator, and the final
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stage
is the electrical
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energy
storage.

In the
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very
first
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stage
steel tank
is required
and 3/4 part
is filled
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compost
such as
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leaves
, food, scraps etc and water
is required
to mix it. After mixing
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compost
ferments the methane
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gas
and produces a
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gas
.
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Gas
is passed
from four pipes attach in one huge pipe and
is transferred
to the second
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stage
. Second
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stage
involves huge tank for the storage of methane. Coming to the third
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stage
methane
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gas
is compressed
in compressor in
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medium sized
tank. Then it
is released
to the fourth
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stage
with the
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help
of connecting pipe which
is connected
to all six stages.

Fourth
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stage
includes combusting engine methane
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gas
which
were compressed
are put
on the engine and after that it releases the mechanical
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energy
.
Next
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stage
is the second last
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stage
where
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energy
which
were released
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come
to a generator and the machine release the electrical
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energy
out then in the final
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stage
the electricity
is stored
in a battery.
That is
the same electricity which can be
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used
in home.

Concluding in future it seems possible with
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only
six
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stages
and with the
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help
of
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compost
and water, home
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energies
can
be generated
.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows a possible future means of home energy production.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
235 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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