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The two maps above show a park in Canada before and after a renovation project.

The two maps above show a park in Canada before and after a renovation project. yDDAg
The given maps reveal how Canada's park changed substantially in landscape and the renovation that has taken place between 2015 and the past two decades. Looking at the first map, the park was undeveloped with a narrow parking area, a few vehicle ways, and it had only one campsite. Moving on to 2015, it was apparent that their facilities have considerable changed, such as the campsite, the path for walking/biking and shuttle bus, and the cafe, which nearby the route and the information center have established. Similarly, the shuttle bus stop has created four spots. Moreover, the parking area has extended to one kilometer in length. In the same way, the information center has changed the location to replace the parking area. In contrast, there are some places that still remain the same. For instance, the highway, river, waterfall, and lake. To sum up, comparing the two maps, there are significant changes taking place at the park after the renovation.
The
given
maps reveal how Canada's park
changed
substantially
in landscape and the renovation that has taken place between 2015 and the past two decades. Looking at the
first
map, the park
was undeveloped
with a narrow parking area, a few vehicle ways, and it had
only
one campsite.

Moving on to 2015, it was apparent that their facilities have considerable
changed
, such as the campsite, the path for walking/biking and shuttle bus, and the
cafe
, which nearby the route and the information center have established.
Similarly
, the shuttle bus
stop
has created four spots.
Moreover
, the parking area has extended to one kilometer in length.
In the same way
, the information center has
changed
the location to replace the parking area.
In contrast
, there are
some
places that
still
remain the same.
For instance
, the highway, river, waterfall, and lake.

To sum up, comparing the two maps, there are significant
changes
taking place at the park after the renovation.
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IELTS academic The two maps above show a park in Canada before and after a renovation project.

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