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The chart dispatch in Panama city about the transition of three kinds of crime in a decade.

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The chart dispatch in Panama city about the transition of three kinds of crime in a decade. Overall, bulglary case in Panama city has decreased significantly in a decade. However, car theft was increased slightly. In 2010, the bulglary case in Panama city was the highest amongts other crimes with around 3400 number of incidents, but after experienced a slightly increased at 3800 incidents in 2011. It was decreased dramatically in four years for hovering 1000 incidents and stay constant until the end of decade. Meanwhile, cases for car theft in Panama city in 2010 was stood in around 2800 incidents and it was significantly dropped with approximately 2000 incidents in 2013. This number remain steady to 2016 where it finally increased slightly to around 2800 in 2019. Apart from that there was also the robbery crime that maintain stable for hovering 1000 incidents in the end of the data. Dewi Private, [09. 09. 21 23: 56] New vocab 1. Provide = menyediakan 2. Offer = menawarkan 3. Against = melawan 4. Obvious = clear 5. Keen = tajam 6. Kin = family 7. Smuggling = penyelundupan 8. Caught = tertangkap 9. Binge = do or consume something tk excess 10. Glossy = Berkilau
The chart dispatch in
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Panama city
about the transition of three kinds of crime in a decade.

Overall
,
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bulglary
case in
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Panama city
has decreased
significantly
in a decade.
However
, car theft
was increased
slightly
.

In 2010, the
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bulglary
case in
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Panama city
was the highest
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amongts
other crimes with around 3400 number of
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incidents
,
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but
after experienced a
slightly
increased at 3800
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incidents
in 2011. It
was decreased
dramatically
in four years for hovering 1000
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incidents
and stay constant until the
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end
of decade.

Meanwhile, cases for car theft in
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Panama city
in 2010
was stood
in around 2800
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incidents
and it was
significantly
dropped with approximately 2000
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incidents
in 2013. This number remain steady to 2016 where it
finally
increased
slightly
to around 2800 in 2019. Apart from that there was
also
the robbery crime that maintain stable for hovering 1000
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incidents
in the
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end
of the data.

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Dewi
Private, [09. 09. 21 23: 56]

New vocab

1. Provide =
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menyediakan


2. Offer =
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menawarkan


3. Against =
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melawan


4. Obvious =
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clear


5. Keen =
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tajam


6. Kin = family

7. Smuggling =
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penyelundupan


8. Caught =
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tertangkap


9. Binge = do or consume something
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tk
excess

10. Glossy =
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Berkilau
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IELTS academic The chart dispatch in Panama city about the transition of three kinds of crime in a decade.

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