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The diagram below shows how Olive Oil is manufactured. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The given diagram shows the process in the production of Olive oil. Overall, Olive oil production is a step-by-step process that involves seven stages, the process starts from the picking to the sale of the finished product. The process of making Olive oil starts by harvesting ripe Olives from trees and then taken to a rinsing machine where they are washed in cold water. Following this, the Olives are transferred through a conveyor belt to another machine which grinds the Olives to separate the fruit from the seeds. Next, the olives are ground into a paste, and after Olive stones are removed. After that, the Olive paste is then placed in a perforated bag before being put through a pressing machine. Followed by another process where any excess water is separated from the oil. And finally, the Olive oil is packed and stored in the storage area from there it is delivered to shops where it can be sold.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
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shows
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 in the production of Olive oil.

Overall
, Olive You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoatgrease
oil
 production is a step-by-step You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 that involves seven stages, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 from the picking to the sale of the finished product.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 of making Olive You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoatgrease
oil
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 by harvesting ripe You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbeigedrabkhakibrownish
Olives
 from trees and then taken to a rinsing machine where they are washed
 in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 water. Following this, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbeigedrabkhakibrownish
Olives
are transferred
 through a conveyor belt to another machine which grinds the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbeigedrabkhakibrownish
Olives
 to separate the fruit from the seeds. Next
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbeigedrabkhakibrownish
olives
are ground
 into a paste, and after Olive stones are removed
.

After that, the Olive paste is then placed in a perforated bag This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
being put
 through a pressing machine. Followed by another You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 where any excess water is separated
 from the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoatgrease
oil
. And finally
, the Olive You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoatgrease
oil
is packed
 and stored in the storage area from there it is delivered
 to shops where it can be sold
. 