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The chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education.

The bar chart compares the number of females per 100 males registered in primary, secondary, and tertiary education in 1990 and 1998. It is measured in percentages. Overall, it is clear that the proportion in developed countries was slightly higher than in underdeveloped countries; moreover, only developed countries in tertiary education crossed their target. The figure increased in developing ones, while developed countries figure were almost the same except tertiary education, where there was a slight increase. In terms of primary education, the ratio of a developing country and the developed country stood at 83% and 95% sequentially; it was a slight increase in a developing country, which was 87%, but in a developed country, it was about the same. Both of them did not reach their target. With regard to secondary education, the former and later started at 72% and 98% respectively; there was a minimal increase in former to 82%, while the other one was around the same. Only developed countries were closed to their target. Regarding tertiary education, there was a witness that developed countries surpassed their target level with 195% in 1990 and 112% in 1998. The figure for developing countries showed a significant decrease to 66% and 75% in 1990 and 1998.
The bar chart compares the number of females per 100 males registered in primary, secondary, and tertiary
education
in 1990 and 1998. It
is measured
in percentages.

Overall
, it is
clear
that the proportion in
developed
countries
was
slightly
higher than in underdeveloped
countries
;
moreover
,
only
developed
countries
in tertiary
education
crossed their target. The figure increased in
developing
ones, while
developed
countries
figure were almost the same except tertiary
education
, where there was a slight increase.

In terms of primary
education
, the ratio of a
developing
country
and the
developed
country
stood at 83% and 95%
sequentially
; it was a slight increase in a
developing
country
, which was 87%,
but
in a
developed
country
, it was about the same. Both of them did not reach their target.

With regard to secondary
education
, the former and later
started
at 72% and 98%
respectively
; there was a minimal increase in former to 82%, while the other one was around the same.
Only
developed
countries
were closed
to their target.

Regarding tertiary
education
, there was a witness that
developed
countries
surpassed their target level with 195% in 1990 and 112% in 1998. The figure for
developing
countries
showed
a significant decrease to 66% and 75% in 1990 and 1998.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education.

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