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The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.

The given line graph illustrates the number of Carribean island visitors between 2010 and 2017. It can be clearly seen that until 2016 staying on island was popular than staying on cruise ships. At the start of the decade, overall number of visitors reached its though of 1 million. The visitors who stayed on island were about 0. 7 million, whereas visitors who stayed on cruise were about 0. 25 million. Following year, the number of visiors staying on island remained stable, whereas the number of visitors staying on ships increased gradually. Then the number of visitors staying on island increased steadily until 2013, where it reached 1. 5 million visitors. Following two years from 2013 until 2015, the number remained stable, while the number of visitors staying on a cruise ships fluctuated from 2011 to 2013. The next year, in 2014, the number increased dramatically. After that, the number of visitors on a cruise ships increased steadily and reached a high of 2 million visitors in 2017. From 2015 to 2017 saw a fluctuatuion among visitors staying on Carribean island, and at that moment the number was 1. 5 million visitors. At that year, the total number reached peak of 3. 5 millions of visitors,
The
given
line graph illustrates the
number
of
Carribean
island
visitors
between 2010 and 2017. It can be
clearly
seen
that until 2016
staying
on
island
was popular than
staying
on
cruise
ships.

At the
start
of the decade,
overall
number
of
visitors
reached
its
though
of 1
million
. The
visitors
who stayed on
island
were about 0. 7
million
, whereas
visitors
who stayed on
cruise
were about 0. 25
million
. Following
year
, the
number
of
visiors
staying
on
island
remained stable, whereas the
number
of
visitors
staying
on ships
increased
gradually
. Then the
number
of
visitors
staying
on
island
increased
steadily
until 2013, where it
reached
1. 5
million
visitors
. Following two years from 2013 until 2015, the
number
remained stable, while the
number
of
visitors
staying
on a
cruise
ships fluctuated from 2011 to 2013. The
next
year
, in 2014, the
number
increased
dramatically
. After that, the
number
of
visitors
on a
cruise
ships
increased
steadily
and
reached
a high of 2
million
visitors
in 2017.

From 2015 to 2017
saw
a
fluctuatuion
among
visitors
staying
on
Carribean
island
, and at that moment the
number
was 1. 5
million
visitors
. At that
year
, the total
number
reached
peak of 3. 5
millions
of
visitors
,
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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