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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. kP5d
The pictorial representation manifest the process of instant noodles production. Overall, there are total eight steps in the process, starting with storage silos and ending with labeling and sealing process. At a quick glance, flour is taken from storage silos then, put into the mixer, where water and oil is added. After that, sheets made of the ready dough with the roller machine. Nextly, sheets are transformed into strip to make noodles discs. Probing ahead, noodles discs are cooked and dried with mixing of oil. In subsequent, noodles are put into the cups, where some vegetables and spices are added. Finally, cups are send for labelling and sealing process, and instant noodles are ready to consume.
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production.
Overall
, there are total eight steps in the
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process
, starting with storage silos and ending with labeling and sealing
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process
. At a quick glance, flour
is taken
from storage silos then, put into the mixer, where water and oil is
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added
. After that, sheets made of the ready dough with the roller machine.
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, sheets
are transformed
into strip to
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make
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noodles
discs. Probing ahead,
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noodles
discs
are cooked
and dried with mixing of oil. In subsequent,
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noodles
are put
into the cups, where
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some
vegetables and spices are
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added
.
Finally
, cups are
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send
for labelling and sealing
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, and instant
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are ready to consume.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

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