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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. dYA7
The illustration demonstrates step by step process to produce instant noodles. Overall, it is clear from the diagram that to complete all steps it brings with to store flour in silos and last step is labelling and sealing. In the beginning of the process flour is storage in silos. From silos, flour go to the mixer where water and oil are mixed with flour. From mixer, those raw materials are going over the machine and rollers make those raw material to dough sheets. Dough sheets go to next step, in this step machine cut dough sheets and make dough strips, which is fourth step of this process. In contrast, from dough strips, in next step, machine make noodles discs and those noodles discs go into cooking process. In this cooking process noodles discs cook by oil and then make them in drying process which is step six. After cooking process complete noodles discs put into cups and mix vegetable and spices into cups. In last step, those cups are labeling and sealing in the tables.
The illustration demonstrates
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to produce instant noodles.

Overall
, it is
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clear
from the diagram that to complete all
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steps
it brings with to store
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flour
in silos and last
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step
is labelling and sealing.

In the beginning of the
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process
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flour
is storage in silos. From silos,
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flour
go to the mixer where water and oil
are mixed
with
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flour
. From mixer, those raw materials are going over the machine and rollers
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make
those raw material to
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dough
sheets.
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Dough
sheets go to
next
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, in this
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machine
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cut
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dough
sheets and
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make
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strips, which is fourth
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of this process.

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, from
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dough
strips, in
next
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, machine
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make
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noodles
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discs
and those
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noodles
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go into cooking
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. In this cooking
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noodles
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discs
cook by oil and then
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make
them in drying
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which is
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six. After cooking
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complete
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noodles
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discs
put into cups and mix vegetable and spices into cups. In last
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, those cups are labeling and sealing in the tables.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

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175 words
6.0
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