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the charts show how energy used in Australian households and the greenhouse gas emission which result from this energy use

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In this infographic, there are 2 pie charts; the first chart clearly illustrates the percentage of households using the energy, while another chart well compares the emission of greenhouse gas in 6 particular ways and also take place in Australia. In the first pie chart, it is noticeable that the proportion of energy usage for heating makes up for the highest at 42% followed by water heating at 30%. Moreover, there are almost as many as consumption in refrigeration as that in lighting at 7% and 4% respectively. The number of Australian households consuming the energy by cooling is only 2%. Interestingly, the figure of using other appliances accounts for 15% by the Australian households. In the second pie chart, it can be noticed that water heating is emitted the most greenhouse gas to the atmosphere. Meanwhile, there are almost as equal as emission by heating (15%) as that by refrigeration (14%). The percentage of lighting and cooling is released in negligible amounts at 8% and 3% respectively. Finally, the sum of emitted greenhouse gas by other appliances contribute to the second largest at 28%.

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 the most greenhouse gas to the atmosphere. Meanwhile, there are almost as equal as emission by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmeltingcookingwarming
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 (15%) as that by refrigeration (14%). The percentage of lighting and cooling is released
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. Finally
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