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The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on fuel. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on fuel. eq0p
The graph illustrates the usage of fuel with respect to their income percentage. Its shows the spending of The United States and United Kingdom between poorest, middle-income and richest. Overall, the data indicates that more the income class increase, percentage of income on consumption of fuel decrease in The United States. However, In United Kingdom with increase in income class leads to spend more amount of income on fuel. In The United states, Firstly, poorest people spend about 4% of their income on fuel, which dramatically increase to more than 5% before started falling. Secondly, Middle-income group initially spend about 5% of their income on fuel, although, it decrease gradually with time less than 4%. Lastly, Richest people in The United state spend least percentage of their amount on fuel which started from 4% which decrease to less than 3% over the period. In United Kingdom, poorest people initially spend less than 1% of their income on fuel which has increased over the time and reached up to more than 2% at the end. Whereas, middle-income people spends more that 2% of their income which also increased with the time over 4% at the end. Richest people spend less than middle-income which is less than 4% and it also decrease over the years to 3% at the end.
The graph illustrates the usage of
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the spending of The
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United
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and
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United
Kingdom between poorest, middle-income and richest.

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income
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class
increase, percentage of
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income
on consumption of
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fuel
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decrease
in The
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United
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States
.
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United
Kingdom with increase in
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income
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class
leads to
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spend
more amount of
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income
on fuel.

In The
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United
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states
,
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,
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poorest
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people
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spend
about 4% of their
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income
on
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fuel
, which
dramatically
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before
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falling.
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about 5% of their
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on
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fuel
, although, it
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decrease
gradually
with time
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less
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,
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Richest
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people
in The
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United
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state
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spend
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least
percentage of their amount on
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fuel
which
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from 4% which
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to
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less
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over
the period.

In
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United
Kingdom,
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poorest
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people
initially
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spend
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less
than 1% of their
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income
on
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fuel
which has increased
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the time and reached up to more than 2% at the
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, middle-income
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people
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spends
more that 2% of their
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which
also
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over
4% at the
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end
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Richest
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less
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less
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also
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decrease
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over
the years to 3% at the
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end
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IELTS academic The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on fuel.

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6.0
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