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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given illustration provides information related to the process of making the instant noodle. In general, this production chain can be divided into two main stages, beginning with the preparation of raw materials and shaping the raw materials, then finishing with cooking and processing, finally packaging for later consumption. At the beginning of the process, flour is taken from the storage silos to a series of conveyor belts by a dump truck. Here, they are mixed with water and oil before being rolled into the machine and turned into dough sheets. Subsequently, these sheets are cut into strips then formed into compact ‘Noodles discs’ in order to prepare for the next steps. At the following stage, noodles discs are dried after they have been fried with oil. Then, they are put into paper cups together with assorted vegetables and spices to add favour. Finally, the process ends with instant noodle glasses that have been labeled and sealed so that the completed product is ready for retail. Overall, it is clear that making instant noodles is an automated process, except for the taking and storing of flour, everything happens on one series of conveyor belts.
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illustration provides information related to the
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process
of making the instant

noodle.
In general
, this production chain can
be divided
into two main stages, beginning with the preparation of raw materials and shaping the raw materials, then finishing with cooking and processing,
finally
packaging for later consumption.

At the beginning of the
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process
, flour
is taken
from the storage silos to a series of

conveyor belts by a dump truck. Here, they
are mixed
with water and oil
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before
being rolled
into the machine and turned into dough sheets.
Subsequently
, these sheets are
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cut
into strips then formed into compact
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‘Noodles
discs’ in order to prepare for the
next
steps.

At the following stage,
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noodles
discs
are dried
after they have
been fried
with oil. Then, they
are put
into paper cups together with assorted vegetables and spices to
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add
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favour
.
Finally
, the
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process
ends with instant
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noodle
glasses that have
been labeled
and sealed

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so
that the completed product is ready for retail.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that making instant
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noodles
is an automated
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process
,
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except for
the

taking and storing of flour, everything happens on one series of conveyor belts.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

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