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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. b18l

The figure below illustrates the manufacturing process of instant noodles. Overall, it is clear that the process consists of 8 stages starting from Storage silos and ends with Labeling and sealing. In the first stage, flour from vehicles is stored in storage silos will be mixed with water and oil in a mixer followed by a roller which is used to create dough sheets. These sheets will be converted into dough strips in the next stage using different machines. In the second stage, strips will be processed into Noodles discs and these discs will be cooked with oil followed by drying process. Later on, the discs will be mixed with vegetables and different species and will be arranged in cups. At last, the cups will be labelled and sealed.

The figure below illustrates the manufacturing process of instant noodles.

Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the process consists of 8 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stages
 starting from Storage silos and ends with Labeling and sealing.

In the first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
, flour from vehicles is stored
 in storage silos will be mixed
 with water and oil in a mixer followed by a roller which is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to create dough sheets. These sheets will be converted
 into dough strips in the next
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
 using This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 machines.

In the second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
, strips will be processed
 into Noodles discs and these discs will be cooked
 with oil followed by drying process. Later on, the discs will be mixed
 with vegetables and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 species and will be arranged
 in cups. At last, the cups will be labelled
 and sealed. 