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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. b18l
The figure below illustrates the manufacturing process of instant noodles. Overall, it is clear that the process consists of 8 stages starting from Storage silos and ends with Labeling and sealing. In the first stage, flour from vehicles is stored in storage silos will be mixed with water and oil in a mixer followed by a roller which is used to create dough sheets. These sheets will be converted into dough strips in the next stage using different machines. In the second stage, strips will be processed into Noodles discs and these discs will be cooked with oil followed by drying process. Later on, the discs will be mixed with vegetables and different species and will be arranged in cups. At last, the cups will be labelled and sealed.
The figure below illustrates the manufacturing process of instant noodles.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that the process consists of 8
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stages
starting from Storage silos and ends with Labeling and sealing.

In the
first
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stage
, flour from vehicles
is stored
in storage silos will
be mixed
with water and oil in a mixer followed by a roller which is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to create dough sheets. These sheets will
be converted
into dough strips in the
next
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stage
using
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different
machines.

In the second
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stage
, strips will
be processed
into Noodles discs and these discs will
be cooked
with oil followed by drying process. Later on, the discs will
be mixed
with vegetables and
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different
species and will
be arranged
in cups. At last, the cups will
be labelled
and sealed.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
129 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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