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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. QerP

The picture illustrates the information about the manufacturing instant noodles. There are 8 steps starting with storage silos and finishing with labeling and sealing. Firstly, from storage silos flour was arrived to mixer. Upon being mixed, with water and oil it sent to the next step which called dough strips being, unstriped noodles will be not ready. The last step of first leg is preparation of noodles discs. Secondly, preparatory of oil and drying. Upon being added, vegetables and spices it sent to the last step which is labelling and sealing. After all of them the last step of second leg is finished product prepared. Overall, it is clear that diagram provided that how workers of manufacture cooking snatch noodles for state. And there are 8 steps which are presented there.

The picture illustrates the information about the manufacturing instant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
. There are 8 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
steps
 starting with storage silos and finishing with labeling and sealing.

Firstly
, from storage silos flour was arrived
 to mixer. Upon being mixed
, with water and oil it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to the next
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step
 which called dough strips being, Possible spelling mistake found.stripedunscripteduntriedpinstripedunstainedunstopped
unstriped
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noodles
 will be not ready. The last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
 of first
 leg is preparation of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 discs.

Secondly
, preparatory of oil and drying. Upon being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
, vegetables and spices it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to the last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
 which is labelling and sealing. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 all of them the last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
 of second leg is finished
 product prepared.

Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that diagram provided that how workers of manufacture cooking snatch You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 for state. And there are 8 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
steps
 which are presented
 there. 