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The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.

The diagram illustrates the procedures of how does the ethanol fuel formed from the corn in simple steps. It contains nine from taking corn till transportation. The process of producing fuel takes 57 hours. First setps starts with storing the corn and then milling it so it can be ready to be cooked. In the cooking stage you will need to add water. After four hours of cooking you will have to fermenting it for another 48 hours. When it’s ready it will enter the separation process with isolate the liquid from the solid. The liquid used in purifying ethanol which takes around 5 hours. Coming to end, after it has been purifying it will be stored for it to be ready to be delivered. Overall, it’s clear that we will not need any chemical ingredients for this procedures.

The diagram illustrates the procedures of how does the ethanol fuel formed from the corn in simple steps. It contains nine from taking corn till transportation. The process of producing fuel takes 57 hours.

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