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The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

The Flow chart explains how the ethanol fuel is produced from Corn. It has explained in the below three paragraphs. Firtsly, Corn has to take. corn has to store fo some days so that it can go to the next stage. After storing the corn the it will go to the next process that is millig. After milling has completed then add water to that as required and the cook for 4 hours so that it can boil. After cooking then the entire thing has to be fermented for 48 hours. and next it has to seperate the liquid and the solid by product. The lolid by product which is seperated has to remove from the process. Next the remaining soild by liquid has to go for further process that is it has to purify in ethano for 5 hours. after that storing of that liquid has to be taken. Then the alst stage is to transport the ethanol fuel.

The Flow chart This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interprets
explains
 how the ethanol fuel is produced
 from Corn.

It has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpreted
explained
 in the below three paragraphs.

Possible spelling mistake found.Firstly
Firtsly
, Corn This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 take. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Corn
corn
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 store Possible spelling mistake found.forFOoftogono
fo
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 days This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that it can go to the next
 stage. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 storing the corn Please verify. Did you mean “it” or “the IT” (= information technology)?itthe IT
the it
 will go to the next
 process that is
Possible spelling mistake found.millingMillie
millig
.

After milling has completed then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 water to that as required and the cook for 4 hours This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that it can boil. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
After
 cooking then the entire thing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
be fermented
 for 48 hours. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.And
and
next
 it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
Possible spelling mistake found.separate
seperate
 the liquid and the solid by product. The Possible spelling mistake found.solid
lolid
 by product which is Possible spelling mistake found.separated
seperated
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 remove from the process.

Next
 the remaining Possible spelling mistake found.soldsoilsolidsoilssoiled
soild
 by liquid This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 go for further
 process that is
 it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 purify in Possible spelling mistake found.ethanolEthanethane
ethano
 for 5 hours. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.After
after
 that storing of that liquid This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
be taken
. Then the Possible spelling mistake found.lastalsoLSTasstaltsALAT
alst
 stage is to transport the ethanol fuel. 