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The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

The Flow chart explains how the ethanol fuel is produced from Corn. It has explained in the below three paragraphs. Firtsly, Corn has to take. corn has to store fo some days so that it can go to the next stage. After storing the corn the it will go to the next process that is millig. After milling has completed then add water to that as required and the cook for 4 hours so that it can boil. After cooking then the entire thing has to be fermented for 48 hours. and next it has to seperate the liquid and the solid by product. The lolid by product which is seperated has to remove from the process. Next the remaining soild by liquid has to go for further process that is it has to purify in ethano for 5 hours. after that storing of that liquid has to be taken. Then the alst stage is to transport the ethanol fuel.
The Flow chart
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explains
how the ethanol fuel
is produced
from Corn.

It has
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explained
in the below three paragraphs.

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Firtsly
, Corn
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has to
take.
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corn
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has to
store
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fo
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some
days
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so
that it can go to the
next
stage.
“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
storing the corn
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the it
will go to the
next
process
that is
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millig
.

After milling has completed then
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add
water to that as required and the cook for 4 hours
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so
that it can boil.
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After
cooking then the entire thing
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has to
be fermented
for 48 hours.
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and
next
it
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has to
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seperate
the liquid and the solid by product. The
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lolid
by product which is
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seperated
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has to
remove from the process.

Next
the remaining
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soild
by liquid
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has to
go for
further
process
that is
it
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has to
purify in
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ethano
for 5 hours.
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after
that storing of that liquid
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has to
be taken
. Then the
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alst
stage is to transport the ethanol fuel.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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