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The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on fuel.

The line graph illustrates the detailed data about how much percentage of income does people contribute to fuel in the United States and the United Kingdom. Overall, the percentage of spending income on fuel is greater in the United Kingdom while compared with the USA. However, it is also speculated that both witnesses dramatic changes. It is noticeable from the chart, in the UK the poorest attributes around 0. 5% of their income on fuel and later it rises to nearly 2. 5%. Moreover, the people of middle income based contributes equally with poor at start which is 2. 5% but it then increases gradually to 3. 2%. Furthermore, it again starts rises and reached to almost 4%. Likewise, the richest also spends 4% at the beginning but fluctuates then and finally they decrease to approximately 3. 5%. Switching to the USA, initially poor people spend nearly 4% of their income on fuel but then it increases significantly and reached to about 5. 2%. Moreover, after this achievement it declines to 5% and enters to the category of middle income peoples. However, they too spend 5% at beginning and after then they have a drastic decline in spending which attained to almost 4%. Finally, the richest at start spends 4% later they tend to reduce to 3% in contributing their income on fuel.
The line graph illustrates the detailed data about how much percentage of
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income
does
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contribute to
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fuel
in the United States and the United Kingdom.

Overall
, the percentage of spending
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income
on
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fuel
is greater in the United Kingdom while compared with the USA.
However
, it is
also
speculated that both witnesses dramatic
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changes
.

It is noticeable from the chart, in the UK the poorest attributes around 0. 5% of their
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income
on
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fuel
and later it rises to
nearly
2. 5%.
Moreover
, the
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people
of middle
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income
based contributes
equally
with poor at
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start
which is 2. 5%
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but
it then increases
gradually
to 3. 2%.
Furthermore
, it again
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starts
rises and reached to almost 4%.
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, the richest
also
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spends
4% at the beginning
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but
fluctuates then and
finally
they decrease to approximately 3. 5%.

Switching to the USA,
initially
poor
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people
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spend
nearly
4% of their
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fuel
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but
then it increases
significantly
and reached to about 5. 2%.
Moreover
, after this achievement it declines to 5% and enters to the category of middle
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peoples
.
However
, they too
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spend
5% at beginning and after then they have a drastic decline in spending which attained to almost 4%.
Finally
, the richest at
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start
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spends
4% later they tend to
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reduce
to 3% in contributing their
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fuel
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