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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

The given pie chart illustrates the percentage of 3 different types of aged people of 2 different countries in 2000 and the estimation for 2050. According to statistical data, in the year of 2000 of the Yemen, there are 50. 1% of young people, who are less than 14 years whereas, it may be dramatically decreased to 37% by 2050. Moreover, with 46. 3% of 15-59 age group was the second highest in the past but it might be escalated to 57. 3% and it stand at the first position. Moving on to the Italy, the highest population was between 15-59 age people in the year 2000 but when it comes to 2050 there are chances to fell down to 46. 2% and still stands by first place. Additionally, 24. 1% of old citizens were few in the past on the contrasty they will be increased to 42. 3% in coming time and also make their place at second. All in all, in the Yemen, there are extremely few old people in the both categories of past and further. In the Italy, the young people play’s a very less role in the both formats. Furthermore, in the average 15-59 age group people plays a vital role in both countries with almost above 40%.

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