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Percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The pie charts illustrates the proportion of water consumption for three different sectors: industrial, agricultural and domestic in six different regions around the world. Notably, water usage for agriculture has significant percentage globally. Only two areas namely North America and Europe consumes water predominantly for Industrial purpose. Both North America and Europe consume higher amount of water in this region for commercial use at 48% and 53% respectively. In contrast, the rate is more than 80% in Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia in terms of water use for production of food. This three area has almost identical water consumption profiles with 7% to 9% of domestic intake and 7%, 5% and 12% of Industrial use respectively. South America has higher portion of water usage at 71% and 19% for both Agricultural and Domestic reason which is higher than North America and Europe surprisingly. But the rate in terms of Industrial consumption is one tenth of total proportion for South America. More or less one third of the water is used for agriculture in North America and Europe which indicates their proper water distribution in all sectors even though they are industrial nation.
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purpose. Both
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in this region for commercial
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for production of food. This three area has almost identical
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consumption profiles with 7% to 9% of domestic intake and 7%, 5% and 12% of
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usage at 71% and 19% for both Agricultural and Domestic reason which is higher than
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consumption is one tenth of total proportion for South America. More or less one third of the
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distribution in all sectors
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IELTS academic Percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

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