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Ich habe die gelesen und akzeptiere diese Neuerungen und weist zusätzlich grosse Freude an der Universität Zürich und der Schweiz

The given pie charts illustrate the verious uses of water in six part of the world in percentage. Most of the places has highest water used percentage, followeby domestic use and then industrial. High Street and a local shop will provide the right area for you with your money in advance for a visit and to be fine to stay there if your car has not arrived in time to the flight and your booking was cancelled as we had no choice in our itinerary as

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IELTS academic Ich habe die gelesen und akzeptiere diese Neuerungen und weist zusätzlich grosse Freude an der Universität Zürich und der Schweiz

Academic

American English

1 paragraphs

85 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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