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Ich habe die gelesen und akzeptiere diese Neuerungen und weist zusätzlich grosse Freude an der Universität Zürich und der Schweiz

The given pie charts illustrate the verious uses of water in six part of the world in percentage. Most of the places has highest water used percentage, followeby domestic use and then industrial. High Street and a local shop will provide the right area for you with your money in advance for a visit and to be fine to stay there if your car has not arrived in time to the flight and your booking was cancelled as we had no choice in our itinerary as
The
given
pie charts illustrate the
verious
uses
of water in six part of the world in percentage. Most of the places has
highest
water
used
percentage,
followeby
domestic
use
and then industrial. High Street and a local shop will provide the right area for you with your money in advance for a visit and to be fine to stay there if your car has not arrived in time to the flight and
your
booking
was cancelled
as we had no choice in our itinerary
as
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IELTS academic Ich habe die gelesen und akzeptiere diese Neuerungen und weist zusätzlich grosse Freude an der Universität Zürich und der Schweiz

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
85 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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