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Describe the process of manufacturing noodles.

Describe the process of manufacturing noodles. paVg2
The diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing instant noodles. Overall, the flour is processed to make noodles which are then packed in cups. In addition to the noodles, some vegetables and spices are added to the cups before they are sealed. The flour which is brought by trucks is stored in the silos. It is then transferred to a mixer. Water and oil are added to the flour and all the raw ingredients are allowed to mix. Once all the ingredients are thoroughly mixed, rollers are used to make sheets of dough. These are then converted to strips. Finally, the dough strips are rolled to make noodle discs. These noodle discs are then cooked in oil, after which they are allowed to dry. Once they are dry, they are packed in cups. In addition to the noodles, vegetables and spices are added to the cups. These cups are then sealed and labelled. This completes the process and they are ready to ship.
The diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing instant noodles.

Overall
, the flour
is processed
to
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make
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noodles
which are then packed in
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cups
.
In addition
to the
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noodles
,
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some
vegetables and spices are
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added
to the
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cups
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before


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they
are sealed
.

The flour which
is brought
by trucks
is stored
in the silos. It is then transferred to a mixer. Water and oil are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
to the flour and all the raw ingredients are
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allowed
to mix. Once all the ingredients are
thoroughly
mixed, rollers are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sheets of dough. These are then converted to strips.
Finally
, the dough strips
are rolled
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noodle
discs. These
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noodle
discs are then cooked in oil, after which they are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
allowed
to dry. Once they are dry, they
are packed
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cups
.
In addition
to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noodles
, vegetables and spices are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cups
. These
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cups
are then sealed and labelled. This completes the process and they are ready to ship.
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IELTS academic Describe the process of manufacturing noodles.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
162 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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