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Describe the process of manufacturing noodles.

Describe the process of manufacturing noodles. paVg2

The diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing instant noodles. Overall, the flour is processed to make noodles which are then packed in cups. In addition to the noodles, some vegetables and spices are added to the cups before they are sealed. The flour which is brought by trucks is stored in the silos. It is then transferred to a mixer. Water and oil are added to the flour and all the raw ingredients are allowed to mix. Once all the ingredients are thoroughly mixed, rollers are used to make sheets of dough. These are then converted to strips. Finally, the dough strips are rolled to make noodle discs. These noodle discs are then cooked in oil, after which they are allowed to dry. Once they are dry, they are packed in cups. In addition to the noodles, vegetables and spices are added to the cups. These cups are then sealed and labelled. This completes the process and they are ready to ship.

The diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing instant noodles.

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, the flour is processed
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make
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noodles
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cups
. In addition
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some
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added
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cups
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they
are sealed
.

The flour which is brought
 by trucks is stored
 in the silos. It is then transferred to a mixer. Water and oil are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to the flour and all the raw ingredients are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 to mix. Once all the ingredients are thoroughly
 mixed, rollers are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 sheets of dough. These are then converted to strips. Finally
, the dough strips are rolled
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodle
 discs. These You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodle
 discs are then cooked in oil, after which they are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 to dry. Once they are dry, they are packed
 in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmugdrinkbowl
cups
. In addition
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
, vegetables and spices are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmugdrinkbowl
cups
. These You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmugdrinkbowl
cups
 are then sealed and labelled. This completes the process and they are ready to ship. 