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The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station

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The flow chart illustrates the generation of electricity in a hydroelectric power station. Overall, it is clear that process of generating electricity requires a hihg level reservoir and generator at lower level. In the first step of the process, the set up of power plant is below the level of river. The generation of hydroelectricity is only done in daytime when the intake is open and flow of water is towards the reversible turbines which are attached to generator. After passing through the turbines water is stored in a low level reservoirs. Moving towards the next step, all the water stored in low level reservoirs is pumped into high level reservoirs passing through the reversible turbines. The electricity stored in generator is disturbed to national grid with help of powerlines.

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