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The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station

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The flow chart illustrates the generation of electricity in a hydroelectric power station. Overall, it is clear that process of generating electricity requires a hihg level reservoir and generator at lower level. In the first step of the process, the set up of power plant is below the level of river. The generation of hydroelectricity is only done in daytime when the intake is open and flow of water is towards the reversible turbines which are attached to generator. After passing through the turbines water is stored in a low level reservoirs. Moving towards the next step, all the water stored in low level reservoirs is pumped into high level reservoirs passing through the reversible turbines. The electricity stored in generator is disturbed to national grid with help of powerlines.
The flow chart illustrates the generation of electricity in a hydroelectric power station.
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, it is
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that process of generating electricity requires a
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level
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reservoir
and generator at lower
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level
. In the
first
step of the process, the set up of power plant is below the
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level
of river. The generation of hydroelectricity is
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only
done in daytime when the intake is open and flow of water is towards the reversible turbines which
are attached
to generator.
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After
passing through the turbines water
is stored
in a low
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level
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reservoirs
. Moving towards the
next
step, all the water stored in low
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level
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reservoirs
is pumped
into high
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level
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reservoirs
passing through the reversible turbines. The electricity stored in generator
is disturbed
to national grid with
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help
of
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powerlines
.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station

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