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The graph shows average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Yj75
The graph depicts the annual expenditure on mobile and land phones during 2001 to 2010. There is a major rise in cell phone services during this period at the same time major decline in the land phone services. In 2001, around $200 is spend on cell phone services while it is $700 for residential phone services. Every year there is a constant rise in cell phone service expenditure. On the other hand the land phone service expenditure is constantly falling down. During 2002 to 2003 the cell phone service expense was in a slight steady pace. In 2006, both the services became equal, moreover the expenditure was same around $550. In 2010, residential service expense was around $400 and cellphone service is at a peak of $750. Overall, we can see that cell phone service expenditure is rising and at the same time land phone service expense is diminishing.
The graph depicts the annual
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on mobile and
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during 2001 to 2010. There is a major rise in
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cell
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phone
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during this period at the same time major decline in the
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land
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phone
services.

In 2001, around $200 is
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cell
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phone
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while it is $700 for residential
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phone
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. Every year there is a constant rise in
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cell
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phone
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.
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the
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land
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phone
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is
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phone
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expense was in a slight steady pace. In 2006, both the
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became equal,
moreover
the
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was same around $550.

In 2010, residential
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expense was around $400 and cellphone
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is at a peak of $750.
Overall
, we can
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cell
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is rising and at the same time
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phone
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expense is diminishing.
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IELTS academic The graph shows average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010.

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