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The charts below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton university in 2019 entering different employment sectors.

The charts below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton university in 2019 entering different employment sectors. mle8

The given pie chart depicts the information about the graduate students of Brighton university in 2019, who involved in different working sections after completing the study of university. It is clearly seen that, there was several employment and job sectors for graduate pupils. The more learners of university were attracting in service industries was almost 33. 0%. About half of numbers 16. 3% students were took jobs in manufacturing industries. Consequently, politics and government were next most popular choice nearly 12. 1% learners went into this department of jobs. Nextly, education was significant career option for individual was about 14. 7% Furthermore, virtually 5. 6 % choices in civil services and 2. 8% with other. Another one was science and technology with 7. 3%and two others transportation and warehouse were involved approximately 7. 8% tutees. Overall, the least preferred career options were charity and sport only 0. 3% and 0. 1% graduate people were chosen this works.

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