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The charts below show the proportion of expenditure by students on average at one university in 200and 2010

The charts below show the proportion of expenditure by students on average at one university in 200and 2010 57JD

The given two pie charts illustrate data regarding the quantity of utilisation normally by students at ona university from 2000 to 2010. Overall it can be clearly seen that spending most money was in Food and drink among other daily expenditure A more detailed look at the charts. In 2000 and 2010 the percentage of Food and drink as well as sport and cultural side stayed unchanged patterns. However Eating out was doubled conpared to 2000, accounting for 8. Another noticeable change between 2000 and 2010 was utilities of electricity or water that showed a big variation of figure over the years. And Transport witnessed a negligible alteration during a decade, standing at 8 and 9. With the reference to changes in expenditure of learners clothing sharply decreased in 5. Holidays and sports and cultural followed unchanged condition, collectively

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 university from 2000 to 2010. Overall
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