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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The line graph compares the figure of visitors who visit a specific Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. It is mentioned in millions. Overall, it is clear that all three lines are increased throughout the period. However, the figure of total was highest, whilst visitors staying on cruise ship was lowest, but its surpassed visitors staying on island at the end of the period. In terms of, visitors on cruise ships and visitors on island, both stood at just above 0 and 0. 5 million sequentially in 2010. Before decreased steadily in 2010 at just over 0, visitors residing on cruise ships rose gradually while people who stayed on island remained constant for one year; then, it soared considerably in 2012, and reached at just below 1. 5 million. Afterwards, cruise ship riders number exceeded from visitors on island between 2015 and 2016. At the end of the period, cruise ship and island people reached at 2 and 1 million respectively. With regard to, total number of visitors started from 1 million; after this, it climbed steeply and reached at above 2 million in 2015, and stabilized for one year. Then, it increased dramatically in 2017, and reached at 3. 5 million by the end of the period.
The line graph compares the figure of
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visitors
who visit a specific Caribbean
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island
from 2010 to 2017. It
is mentioned
in millions.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that all three lines
are increased
throughout the period.
However
, the figure of total was highest, whilst
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visitors
staying on
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cruise
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ship
was lowest,
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but
its surpassed
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visitors
staying on
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island
at the
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end
of the period.

In terms of,
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visitors
on
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cruise
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ships
and
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visitors
on
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island
, both stood at
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just
above 0 and 0. 5
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million
sequentially
in 2010.
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Before
decreased
steadily
in 2010 at
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just
over 0,
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visitors
residing on
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cruise
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ships
rose
gradually
while
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people
who stayed on
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island
remained constant for one year; then, it soared
considerably
in 2012, and
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reached
at
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just
below 1. 5
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million
. Afterwards,
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cruise
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ship
riders number exceeded from
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visitors
on
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island
between 2015 and 2016.

At the
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end
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cruise
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ship
and
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island
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people
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reached
at 2 and 1
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million
respectively
. With regard to, total number of
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visitors
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started
from 1
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million
; after this, it climbed
steeply
and
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reached
at above 2
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million
in 2015, and stabilized for one year. Then, it increased
dramatically
in 2017, and
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reached
at 3. 5
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million
by the
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end
of the period.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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