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The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.

The graph demonstares us three different sector’s water use in worldwide between 1900 an 2000 and the table lists that Brazil and Congo’s water comsumption in 2000. Overall, global use of water displayed increase either three different consumption area which were agriculture, industrial use and domestic use. Besides this, water consumption showed differencies according to their population and irigation lands. In terms of global water use, ınustrial and domestic use started almost zero point however agriculture usage was nearly 500 km3 in 1900. While the amount of agricultural water use reached 3000 km3, domestic water use had the lowest increase compared with two other sector until 2000. When looking at the table, Brazil had 176 milion population although Congo vas 5. 2 milion in 2000. Besides this, Brazil irigated land was considerably bigger than Congo which irrigated 100 km with 26. 500 km. Per person water consumption showed severe difference among Brazil and Congo with 359 and 8 respectively.
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in worldwide between 1900 an 2000 and the table lists that Brazil and Congo’s
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comsumption
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displayed increase either three
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consumption area which were agriculture, industrial
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In terms of global
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,
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reached 3000 km3, domestic
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had the lowest increase compared with two other
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until 2000.

When looking at the table, Brazil had 176
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population although Congo
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severe difference among Brazil and Congo with 359 and 8
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IELTS academic The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.

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