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The pie chart demonstrates us fundemental causes of land degradation’s around the World, the table lists impect percantage of elements which bring about land degradation throughout the 1990s.

The pie chart demonstrates us fundemental causes of land degradation’s around the World, the table lists impect percantage of elements which bring about land degradation throughout the 1990s. Overall, when looking at the pie chart, three major reasons (over-grazing, deforestration, over-cultivation) are observed approximately similar amount. In connection with this, Europe has the most land degraded than other given regions which are North america and oceania. In terms of the pie chart, over-grazing has the most amount of percentage with %35 between three major reasons while the least percentage is over-cultivation with %28. In addition, deforestation resides between over-grazing which is over it and over cultivation which is just under it with %30. Reasons show irregular scatter according to region. Deforestration is the most effective cause on European land degradation with %9. 8, it is also just under half of the european total amount. North America has least total land degradition by %5 and over-cultuvation makes up the biggest part. Oceania include just two reasons unlike other regions. Overgrazing as a cause is almost all of the total degradation.
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degradation’s
around the World, the table lists
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impect
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percantage
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land
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throughout the 1990s.

Overall
, when looking at the pie chart, three major
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reasons
(over-grazing,
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deforestration
, over-cultivation)
are observed
approximately similar amount. In connection with this, Europe has the most
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land
degraded than other
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regions which are
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North america
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reasons
while the least percentage is over-cultivation with %28.
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addition, deforestation resides between over-grazing which is over it and over cultivation which is
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under it with
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%30. Reasons
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irregular scatter according to region.
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Deforestration
is the most effective cause on European
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land
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degradation
with %9. 8, it is
also
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under half of the
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european
total amount. North America has
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degradition
by %5 and
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over-cultuvation
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two
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unlike other regions. Overgrazing as a cause is almost
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IELTS academic The pie chart demonstrates us fundemental causes of land degradation’s around the World, the table lists impect percantage of elements which bring about land degradation throughout the 1990s.

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