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The diagram below shows how a solar powered water pump work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram below shows how a solar powered water pump work. YQMr
The provided diagram illustrate how a solar powered water pump can produce fresh water to the village. First part of this diagram shows, sunlight is essential for the process. So solar panel which consists of photo voltaic cells facing the sun and create dc power from the panel. After this step electricity passing to bore pump which is located inside the underground bore or well. Then filter pump is used to purify the underground water from the well and stored in water tank which is placed on the ground level. This fresh water run through the pipe to village.
The provided diagram illustrate how a solar powered
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pump can produce fresh
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water
to the village.
First
part of this diagram
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, sunlight is essential for the process.
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So
solar panel which consists of photo voltaic cells facing the sun and create dc power from the panel. After this step electricity passing to bore pump which
is located
inside the underground bore or well. Then filter pump is
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used
to purify the underground
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water
from the well and stored in
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tank which
is placed
on the ground level. This fresh
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water
run through the pipe to village.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how a solar powered water pump work.

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