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The diagram below shows how a solar powered water pump work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram below shows how a solar powered water pump work. YQMr

The provided diagram illustrate how a solar powered water pump can produce fresh water to the village. First part of this diagram shows, sunlight is essential for the process. So solar panel which consists of photo voltaic cells facing the sun and create dc power from the panel. After this step electricity passing to bore pump which is located inside the underground bore or well. Then filter pump is used to purify the underground water from the well and stored in water tank which is placed on the ground level. This fresh water run through the pipe to village.

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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how a solar powered water pump work.

Academic

American English

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Lexical Resource: 6.5

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Grammatical Range: 6.5

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