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The diagram below shows the multistage production of pears as as canned fruits. Write a report for a University lecturer describing the process below.

The diagram below shows the multistage production of pears as as canned fruits. Write a report for a University lecturer describing the process below. VNV6
The given process chart depicts the information how to produce canned fruit step by step. Overall, it illustrate the several steps of production of pears as Canned fruit. It begin from peking the pears to finish with product canned. To begin with, firstly, picking the pears and transport for washing, then store the pears in cold place after checking the quality. After that check the weight and mark the grade. Following this, peeling the pears with slicing for canning. Moving further, sealing the pears after canning. Then cooking for labeling after that store the pears for marketing. Then product the canned.
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given
process chart depicts the information how to produce
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canned
fruit step by step.
Overall
, it
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illustrate
the several steps of production of pears as
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Canned
fruit. It
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begin
from
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peking
the pears to finish with product
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canned
. To
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begin
with,
firstly
, picking the pears and transport for washing, then store the pears in
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cold
place after checking the quality. After that
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check
the weight and mark the grade. Following this, peeling the pears with slicing for canning. Moving
further
, sealing the pears after canning. Then cooking for labeling after that store the pears for marketing. Then product the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
canned
.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows the multistage production of pears as as canned fruits. Write a report for a University lecturer describing the process below.

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101 words
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