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The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Gakm
The following line graph shows the variation of number of passengers in london with respect to different timings. At the time of early morning 6 a. m around 100 passengers board the train and gradually we can see a steep rise in the passengers boarding the train which goes upto 400 by 8. The graph can then be seen descending towards 180 passengers by 10. The earlier ascent was probably due to people leaving their home for work and then almost the same number(380) of passengers travelling back to their home by 17: 30 completing their 8 hour work schedule. Post 17: 30 we can again observe steep decline in number of passengers boarding the train which goes upto 120 passengers by 20: 00. A further increase of about 33% can be seen by 21: 00. During 8: 00 and 18: 00 a steady number of passengers could be observed during the time duration of 2 hours from 12: 00 to 14: 00, post which we can again observe a descent of around 66 %.
The following line graph
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board the train and
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a steep rise in the
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boarding the train which goes
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400 by 8. The graph can then be
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descending towards 180
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by 10.

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probably
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people
leaving their home for work and then almost the same
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travelling back to their home by 17: 30 completing their
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8 hour
work schedule.

Post 17: 30 we can again observe steep decline in
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boarding the train which goes
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by 20: 00. A
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by 21: 00.

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during the time duration of 2 hours from 12: 00 to 14: 00, post which we can again observe a descent of around 66 %.

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