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The diagram below shows how a dredger can remove mud from the bottom canals. The table compares features of the canal dredger with those of a coastal dredger.

The diagram below shows how a dredger can remove mud from the bottom canals. The table compares features of the canal dredger with those of a coastal dredger. p19dL
The diagram illustrates the process of how mud is removed from the bottom of canals with the dredgers. Overall, there are only five stages in the process. In the initial steps, a canal dredger carries a suction pump with rotating blades, which is grounded into the canal by two hydraulic arms. Afterwards, they move around, stir mud up, usually called slurry, and a large tube, which is connected to a shuttle boat, sucks it up. When it’s filled with the carried mud, the boat is towed out of the city to be dumped. A coastal dredger is almost three times as big as a canal one. Littoral dredgers are used to suck up mud from a depth of 35 meters, while canal dredgers are made for much more petite waters. Moreover, a coastal boat, designed for dredging is almost two times narrower in comparison to a canal dredger, with 6. 69 and 14 meters of hull breadth respectively. To conclude, it is clear that each dredger is specifically designed for the surroundings where they will operate.
The diagram illustrates the process of how
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mud
is removed
from the bottom of canals with the dredgers.

Overall
, there are
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only
five stages in the process.

In the initial steps, a canal
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dredger
carries a suction pump with rotating blades, which
is grounded
into the canal by two hydraulic arms. Afterwards, they
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move
around, stir
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mud
up,
usually
called slurry, and a large tube, which
is connected
to a shuttle boat, sucks it up. When it’s filled with the carried
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mud
, the boat
is towed
out of the city to
be dumped
.

A coastal
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dredger
is almost three times as
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big
as a canal one. Littoral
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dredgers
are
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used
to suck up
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mud
from a depth of 35 meters, while canal
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dredgers
are made
for much more petite waters.
Moreover
, a coastal boat, designed for dredging is almost two times narrower
in comparison
to a canal
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dredger
, with 6. 69 and 14 meters of hull breadth
respectively
.

To conclude
, it is
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clear
that each
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dredger
is
specifically
designed for the surroundings where they will operate.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows how a dredger can remove mud from the bottom canals. The table compares features of the canal dredger with those of a coastal dredger.

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