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THE GRAPH SHOW THE NUMBER OF MEALS CONSUMED BY AUSTRALIANS.

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THE LINE GRAPH REPRESENTS THE CONSUMPTION OF FAST FOOD BY TEENAGERS OF AUSTRALIA. WHICH WERE CONSUMED IN PERIOD OF 25 YEARS FROM 1975 TO 2000. UNITS ARE MEASURED AS MEALS WITH DIFFERENCE OF 20. OVERALL, PIZZA AND HAMBURGERS INCREASES IN GIVER PERIOD WHILE, FISH AND CRISP DECLINED, AT THE START, FISH AND CRISP ARE DOMINATING WHICH WAS REPLACED BY HAMBURGERS IN 1985 AND BY PIZZA IN 1995. AT THE LAST HAMBURGER IS AT THE HIGHEST POINT WITH MORE THAN PIZZA. IN REGARD TO NUMBER OF PIZZA IS BEGIN WITH AROUND 5 MEALS IN 1975 AND SKYROCKETS UNTIL 1995 WITH 80 MEALS THEN REMAINED CONSTANT FROM 1995-2000. LIKEWISE, IN 1975 THE MEALS CONSUMED AS HAMBURGER IS LESS THAN 20 AND SHOWS DRASTIC RISE TILL 1985 AFTER THAT IT INCREASES SLIGHTLY Until 2000. ON THE OTHER HAND, THE FISH AND CRISPS IS PEAKED AT 100 MEALS PER YEAR IN 1975 AND IT FALLS IN 1980 WITH MERELY ABOVE 80 MEALS. THEN IT INCREASES TILL 1985 AT 90 MEALS. AFTER THAT Dramatically DECREASES TILL 2000 WITH ONLY 40 MEALS.
THE LINE GRAPH REPRESENTS THE CONSUMPTION OF
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FAST
FOOD BY
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TEENAGERS
OF AUSTRALIA. WHICH
WERE CONSUMED
IN PERIOD OF 25 YEARS FROM 1975 TO 2000. UNITS
ARE MEASURED
AS
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MEALS
WITH DIFFERENCE OF 20.

OVERALL
, PIZZA AND HAMBURGERS INCREASES IN GIVER PERIOD WHILE, FISH AND CRISP DECLINED, AT THE
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START
, FISH AND CRISP ARE DOMINATING WHICH
WAS REPLACED
BY HAMBURGERS IN 1985 AND BY PIZZA IN 1995. AT THE LAST HAMBURGER IS AT THE HIGHEST POINT WITH MORE THAN PIZZA.

IN REGARD TO NUMBER OF PIZZA IS
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BEGIN
WITH AROUND 5
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MEALS
IN 1975 AND SKYROCKETS UNTIL 1995 WITH 80
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MEALS
THEN REMAINED CONSTANT FROM 1995-2000.
LIKEWISE
, IN 1975 THE
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MEALS
CONSUMED AS HAMBURGER IS LESS THAN 20 AND
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SHOWS
DRASTIC RISE TILL 1985 AFTER THAT IT INCREASES
SLIGHTLY
Until 2000.

ON THE OTHER HAND
, THE FISH AND CRISPS
IS PEAKED
AT 100
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MEALS
PER YEAR IN 1975 AND IT FALLS IN 1980 WITH
MERELY
ABOVE 80
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MEALS
. THEN IT INCREASES TILL 1985 AT 90
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MEALS
. AFTER THAT
Dramatically
DECREASES TILL 2000 WITH
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ONLY
40
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MEALS
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