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The charts illustrate, how many japanese traveller visit to foreign coutriefrom 1985 to 1995 and the proportion of traveler visit in Australia in the described year. Overall, From the statistics, an increased trend of travelling foreign country seen, where hoghest number of tourist visit in 1995 and lowest number of tourist visit in 1985 to abroad. However, slightly flactuations noticed between 1990-1995. In addition, an overall increased found in Australia's share of japanese tourist market, however, slightly fall noticed in 1985, but it rose again and maintain a positive trend.
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in Australia in the
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in 1995 and lowest number of tourist
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in 1985 to abroad.
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overall
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Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
90 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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