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THE GRAPH BELOW SHOWS THE CONSUMPTION OF 3 SPREADS.

THE GRAPH BELOW SHOWS THE CONSUMPTION OF 3 SPREADS. p19jm
THE LINE GRAPH ILLSUTRATES THE AMOUNT OF THREE SPREADS(MARAGARINE, LOW FAT AND REDUCED SPREADS AND BUTTER) WHICH ARE CONSUMED OVER 26 YEARS FROM 1981 TO 2007. UNITS ARE MEASURED IN GRAMS. OVERALL, THE CONSUMPTION OF MARGARINE AND BUUTER DECREASES OVER THE GIVEN PERIOD WHILE, FOR LOW FAT AND REDUCED SPREADS RISES. AT THE BEGINNING OF THE PERIOD, BUTTER WAS THE MOST POPULARSPREADS, WHICH WAS REPLACED BY MARGARINE FROM1991 TO 2001. FOLLOWING THAT LOW FAT AND REDUCED SPREADS BECAME WIDELY USED SPREAD IN THE FINALS YEARS. WITH REGARDS TO THE AMOUNT OF BUTTER USED, IT BEGAN AT AROUND 140 GRAMS AND PEAKED AT 160GRAMS BEFORE FALLING DRAMATICALLY AT ABOUT 50 GRAMS IN LAST YEARS. LIKEWISE, APPROXIMATELY 90 GRAMS OF MARGARINE WAS EATEN AT INITIAL YEAR AFTER WHICH THE FIGURES FLUCTUATED SLIGHTLY AND DROPPED TO A LOW OF 40 GRAMS IN 2007. ON THE OTHER HAND, THE CONSUMPTION OF LOW FAT AND REDUCED SPREADS ONLY STARTED IN 1996 AT ABOUT 10 GRAMS, THE FIGURE WHICH HIGH RISE IN JUST 5 YEARS WITH AROUND 80 GRAMS. AFTERTHAT, IT SLIGHTLY FELL TO 70 GRAMS IN 2007
THE LINE GRAPH
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ILLSUTRATES
THE AMOUNT OF THREE SPREADS(
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MARAGARINE
,
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LOW
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FAT
AND
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REDUCED
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SPREADS
AND BUTTER) WHICH
ARE CONSUMED
OVER 26 YEARS FROM 1981 TO 2007. UNITS
ARE MEASURED
IN GRAMS.

OVERALL
, THE CONSUMPTION OF MARGARINE AND
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BUUTER
DECREASES OVER THE
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GIVEN
PERIOD WHILE, FOR
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LOW
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FAT
AND
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REDUCED
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SPREADS
RISES. AT THE BEGINNING OF THE PERIOD, BUTTER WAS THE MOST
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POPULARSPREADS
, WHICH
WAS REPLACED
BY MARGARINE FROM1991 TO 2001. FOLLOWING THAT
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LOW
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FAT
AND
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REDUCED
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SPREADS
BECAME
WIDELY
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USED
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SPREAD
IN THE FINALS YEARS.

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WITH REGARDS TO
THE AMOUNT OF BUTTER
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USED
, IT BEGAN AT AROUND 140
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GRAMS
AND PEAKED AT
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160GRAMS
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BEFORE
FALLING
DRAMATICALLY
AT ABOUT 50
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GRAMS
IN LAST YEARS.
LIKEWISE
, APPROXIMATELY 90
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GRAMS
OF MARGARINE
WAS EATEN
AT INITIAL
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YEAR
AFTER WHICH THE FIGURES FLUCTUATED
SLIGHTLY
AND DROPPED TO A
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LOW
OF 40
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GRAMS
IN 2007.

ON THE OTHER HAND
, THE CONSUMPTION OF
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LOW
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FAT
AND
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REDUCED
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SPREADS
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ONLY
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STARTED
IN 1996 AT ABOUT 10
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GRAMS
, THE FIGURE WHICH HIGH RISE IN
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JUST
5 YEARS WITH AROUND 80
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GRAMS
.
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AFTERTHAT
, IT
SLIGHTLY
FELL TO 70
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GRAMS
IN 2007

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