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The diagram below shows a possible future means of home energy production. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows a possible future means of home energy production. XmA8
The diagram illustrates the possible method of producing energy at home in the future. Overall, energy is proposed to be generated out of bio-degradable waste to create compost and use the resultant methane gas to generate electricity after going through various stages in the process. The first step in the process involves filling an underground steel tank with scraps, leaves, and other bio-degradable wastes with water and fill it up to 75% of its capacity. The compost ferments and produces methane gas, which is directed to the storage tank via pipes. The second stage involves allowing methane to pass through a compressor to the combustion engine directed through a long pipeline. The third stage proceeds to take place when mechanical energy produced by the engine is released and directed to a generator, converting the mechanical energy into electrical energy, which is then stored with the help of a battery for usage. The energy thus produced can be used for providing electricity to the home.
The diagram illustrates the possible method of producing
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energy
at home in the future.

Overall
,
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energy
is proposed
to
be generated
out of bio-degradable waste to create compost and
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use
the resultant methane gas to generate electricity after going through various stages in the process.

The
first
step in the process involves filling an underground steel tank with scraps,
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leaves
, and other bio-degradable wastes with water and fill it up to 75% of its capacity. The compost ferments and produces methane gas, which
is directed
to the storage tank via pipes.
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The
second stage involves allowing methane to pass through a compressor to the combustion engine directed through a long pipeline.

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The
third stage proceeds to take place when mechanical
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energy
produced by the engine
is released
and directed to a generator, converting the mechanical
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energy
into electrical
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energy
, which is then stored with the
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help
of a battery for usage.
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The
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energy
thus
produced can be
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used
for providing electricity to the home.
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6.0
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