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The presented bar graph illustrates how many time citizens of Great Britain spent on Local, International and Mobile phone conversations for the period from 1995 to 2002.

The presented bar graph illustrates how many time citizens of Great Britain spent on Local, International and Mobile phone conversations for the period from 1995 to 2002. PyAB
The presented bar graph illustrates how many time citizens of Great Britain spent on Local, International and Mobile phone conversations for the period from 1995 to 2002. It can be seen that in 1995-2002 English people spent the most significant number of minutes on Fixed line local phone calls, meanwhile the Mobile phone calls took the lowest number of time in the UK. According to the chart, there was a gradual upward trend of the total number of minutes of Local phone calls from 1990 to 1995 and then the overall number of time sent on the local calls time reduced steadily, whereas the total duration of cell phone calls skyrocketed for the period from 1995 to 2002. It is clear from the data that the most noticeable number of minutes approximately 90 billion was spent on the local calls in 1995, the figure declined to around 73 billion, which is almost 8% decrease, in 2002. The huge upsurge of overall mobile local calls duration is observed for the whole presented period, it was approximately 40 billion minutes or growth. The total number of International calls minutes moved upward sequentially from 1990 to 2002, from about 38 to 60 billion minutes.
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citizens of Great Britain spent on
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conversations for the period from 1995 to 2002.

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that in 1995-2002 English
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took the lowest
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in the UK. According to the chart, there was a gradual upward trend of the total
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Local
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from 1990 to 1995 and then the
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skyrocketed for the period from 1995 to 2002.

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in 1995, the figure declined to around 73
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duration
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IELTS academic The presented bar graph illustrates how many time citizens of Great Britain spent on Local, International and Mobile phone conversations for the period from 1995 to 2002.

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