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The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015. k1d8
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of multiple social networking sites used between 2014 and 2015 in Canada. Overall, it can be seen that the highest rate that in these two years is one site. Beside, it is observed that five sites usage has the lowest rate between six other variables. In details; even if the rate of one site had the highest percent than other rate in 2014, the rate came down eight point in 2015. Moreover, no sites category and two sites category had very close ratio, while no sites category had 22-21 ratio and two sites had 23-24 ratio in thse two years. Three sites, four sites and five sites increased sharply throughout two years. Three sites had the highest rising point than other type by 4 point. To sum up, multiple site utilization remarkably supplemented in 2015. No sites usage slumped by one point even so it had a considerable proportion. On the other hand, one social networking site category went down substantially by eight percent. In these two years, the preference of people did not change dramatically.
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between six
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015.

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