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THE DIAGRAM BELOW SHOW THE VARIOUS STEPS INVLOVED IN THE RECYCLING PROCESS OF THE PLASTIC BOTTLES. SUMMARIZE THE INFORMATION BY SELECTING AMD REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURE, AND MAKE COMPARISON WHERE RELEVANT.

THE DIAGRAM BELOW SHOW THE VARIOUS STEPS INVLOVED IN THE RECYCLING PROCESS OF THE PLASTIC BOTTLES. BwrJa
THE PROCESS CHART ILLUSTRATES THE HOW PLASTIC BOTTLES ARE RECYLED TO RAW MATERIALS WHICH CAN BE REUSED FOR THE PRODUCTION OF VARIOUS PLASTIC GOODS. OVERALL THERE ARE THREE MAIN STEPS (COLLECTION, PRODUCTION OF PELLET AND PRODUCING RAW MATERIALS. WHICH INCLUDES NINE STEPS. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, THE PEOPLE THROW THE USED PLASTIC CONTAINERS TO TRASH BINS WHICH, IS TRANSPORTED IN ENORMOUS TRUCKS TO RECYLING AREA. AT THIS TIME, THE PLASTIC WASTE IS SORTED OUT FROM WHOLE TRASH AND IT WAS COMPRESSED BY MACHINES TO LARGE BLOCKS. IN CRUSHING PROCESS, THE BLOCK IS CRUSHED INTO TINY PIECES FOR THE SMOOTH PROCESS. IN THE SAME TIME, THE CRUSHED PARTICLES OF PLASTIC IS WASHED UNDER HUGE VESSELS. THE CHART FURTEHR COLLATE THAT, AFTER WASHING, SMALL PARTICLES COME UNDER MACHINES WHERE IT FORM IN PELLETS AND IT IS HEATED AT CERTAIN TEMPERATURE IN ORDER TO MANUFACTURE RAW MATERIALS. FINALLY, THE UNFINISHED PRODUCT IS DISTRIBUTED FOR TO MANUFACTURER FOR THE PRODUCTION OF GOODS MADE FROM REUSED PLASTIC.
THE PROCESS CHART ILLUSTRATES THE HOW
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PLASTIC
BOTTLES ARE
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RECYLED
TO RAW MATERIALS WHICH CAN
BE REUSED
FOR THE PRODUCTION OF VARIOUS
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PLASTIC
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GOODS
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OVERALL
THERE ARE THREE MAIN STEPS
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COLLECTION, PRODUCTION OF PELLET AND PRODUCING RAW MATERIALS. WHICH INCLUDES NINE STEPS.

IT CAN BE
CLEARLY
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SEEN
THAT, THE
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PEOPLE
THROW THE
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USED
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PLASTIC
CONTAINERS TO TRASH BINS WHICH,
IS TRANSPORTED
IN ENORMOUS TRUCKS TO
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RECYLING
AREA. AT THIS TIME, THE
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PLASTIC
WASTE
IS SORTED
OUT FROM WHOLE TRASH AND IT
WAS COMPRESSED
BY MACHINES TO LARGE BLOCKS. IN CRUSHING PROCESS, THE BLOCK
IS CRUSHED
INTO TINY PIECES FOR THE SMOOTH PROCESS. IN THE SAME TIME, THE CRUSHED PARTICLES OF
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PLASTIC
IS WASHED
UNDER HUGE VESSELS.

THE CHART
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FURTEHR
COLLATE THAT, AFTER WASHING,
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SMALL
PARTICLES
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COME
UNDER MACHINES WHERE IT FORM IN PELLETS AND IT
IS HEATED
AT CERTAIN TEMPERATURE IN ORDER TO MANUFACTURE RAW MATERIALS.
FINALLY
, THE UNFINISHED PRODUCT
IS DISTRIBUTED
FOR TO MANUFACTURER FOR THE PRODUCTION OF
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GOODS
MADE FROM REUSED
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