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Describe changes of maps that accursed in paredis Island.

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These maps illustrate how the paradise Island has changed from sentific reaserch Station to tourist attraction. Overall, as it is clear the Island has transformed dramatically to become tourism place full of various services. Looking in more details, at first scientific research station has changed to swimming pool in the hotel which primmted to people who d not like to swim in the beach. Also, it is more easy to access the Island by cruise ship that carry dozens of visitors from different part area. Moreover the existence of cycle path has played an important role to enable those who are passionate to ride cycles. In addition there are two choices for people who are like to proper their food by theirself. They can use barbecue area, while the others who are prefer restaurant food they can get that in the open restaurant which is in front of swimming pool. One striking information, that most of transformations which are take place in the Island were organized and convenient for the most residents and tourists.
These maps illustrate how the paradise
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has
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Station to tourist attraction.
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, as it is
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the
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has transformed
dramatically
to become tourism place full of various services. Looking in more
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details
, at
first
scientific research station has
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changed
to swimming pool in the hotel which
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primmted
to
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people
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who
d not like to swim in the beach.
Also
, it is more easy to access the
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Island
by cruise ship that carry dozens of visitors from
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different
part area.
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Moreover
the existence of cycle path has played an
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important
role to enable those
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who
are passionate to ride cycles. In
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addition
there are two choices for
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people
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who
are like to proper their food by
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theirself
. They can
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use
barbecue area, while the others
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who
are
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restaurant food they can
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that in the open restaurant which is in front of swimming pool. One striking information, that
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most of transformations
which are take place in the
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Island
were organized
and convenient for the most residents and tourists.
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IELTS academic Describe changes of maps that accursed in paredis Island.

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