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CO2 emissions in four countries

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This graph highlights data about average carbon dioxide emissions for per person in four countries, over a forty-year period between 1967 and 2007. Overall, it can be seen that there were considerable upward trends in the CO2 emissions of both Italy and Portugal, whereas the CO2 exhausting of Sweden and UK illustrates a significant fall over the period in question. Another interesting point is that UK was the most popular country in 1967 and did not change its position during 40 years according to carbon dioxide emissions per person. Looking at the details, as regards UK, CO2 emission started at about 11mt in 1967, then there was a stable decrease until 2007, dropping nearly 9 mt. With respect Sweden, having increased sharply from approximately 10 mt in the first decade, CO2 emission then fell fairly rapidly to around 7 mt in 1987. Following this, there was a gradual decline to just under 6 mt. in 2007. By contrast, regarding Italy, the average CO2 emission began with just over 4 mt in 1967, after which soared to around 6 mt in 1977. After that, despite rising slowly to just under 8 mt. in 1997, the figure then remained stable during the last decade. As for Portugal, trend was similar. Starting with approximately 1 mt. in 1967, CO2 emission revealed a gradual increase at around 5 mt in 1997, and then this taken leveled off in tha last 10 years, which meant that it showed the same harm for environment as Sweden.
This graph highlights data about average carbon dioxide
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for per person in four countries, over a forty-year period between 1967 and 2007.

Overall
, it can be
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that there were considerable upward trends in the CO2
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of both Italy and Portugal, whereas the CO2 exhausting of Sweden and UK illustrates a significant fall over the period in question. Another interesting point is that UK was the most popular country in 1967 and did not
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change
its position during 40 years according to carbon dioxide
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per person.

Looking at the
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, as regards UK, CO2
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emission
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at about 11mt in 1967, then there was a stable decrease until 2007, dropping
nearly
9 mt. With respect Sweden, having increased
sharply
from approximately 10 mt in the
first
decade, CO2
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then fell
fairly
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to around 7 mt in 1987. Following this, there was a gradual decline to
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under 6 mt. in 2007.

By contrast, regarding Italy, the average CO2
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began with
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over 4 mt in 1967, after which soared to around 6 mt in 1977. After that, despite rising
slowly
to
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under 8 mt. in 1997, the figure then remained stable during the last decade. As for Portugal, trend was similar. Starting with approximately 1 mt. in 1967, CO2
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revealed a gradual increase at around 5 mt in 1997, and then this taken leveled off in
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last 10 years, which meant that it
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the same harm for environment as Sweden.
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IELTS academic CO2 emissions in four countries

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