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The diagram below show the production of olive oil.

The diagram below show the production of olive oil. 8X1m
the given diagram illustrates the information about how is produce of olive oil it is a clear that seven steps are involved in the process from packing to the final sale. overview it can be seen that the process of manufacturing the olive oil is the long and complex involving a plaster of steps and many devices. it is clear that our lives are big from the alloys tree of the day had the fresh alloys are washed in cold water and resized survival times until they are clean enough then the olives are put on a belt before being before put in a smashing device in which they are smashed and separate into alive stones and alive based in The fourth stage the alive based is put into a bag with holes and the whole things input on the processing machine where it is a press to get the maximum possible liquid. Hindi six step this liquid is put into another separate device in which it is there separate into oil water and the water and oil come out from separate outlets finally oil is packed in boxes for storage and sale in market.
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diagram illustrates the information about how is produce of olive
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oil
it is a
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clear
that seven steps
are involved
in the process from packing to the final sale.

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overview
it can be
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that the process of manufacturing the olive
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oil
is the long and complex involving a plaster of steps and
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many
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clear
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lives
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big
from the alloys tree of the day had the fresh alloys
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in
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cold
water and resized survival times until they are clean
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then the olives are
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on a belt
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before
being
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in a smashing device in which they
are smashed
and
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into alive stones and alive based in The fourth stage the alive based is
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put
into a bag with holes and the whole things input on the processing machine where it is a press to
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the maximum possible liquid.

Hindi six step this liquid is
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water and the water and
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is packed
in boxes for storage and sale in market.
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IELTS academic The diagram below show the production of olive oil.

Academic
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4 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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