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The graph below shows the reported number of case of influenza in people over 65 in a certain village in the UK from 1985 to 1995

The graph below shows the reported number of case of influenza in people over 65 in a certain village in the UK from 1985 to 1995 xWk6
The graph illustrates the information of case of influenza in human over 65 in a certain states in the UK between 1985 and 1995. Overall, it can be clearly seen that, the rates of flu has fluctuated throughout the period. In mid-year the ratio of peole has moderately increased in the Village. On the one hand, in the year 1985 the issues was slightly grew up around 40 of people. Also, the line graph rapidly climbed up more than a half in the year 1987. However, the rates was gradually decreased in the year 1988 approximately 45 of people, it was steadily increased from 1988 to 1989 about more than two fifths. In addition, the number of people were rocketed around 70 in the year 1990. Despite, the number of people fluctuated between 61 in the year 1992 before dropping gradually more than half in the year 1995.
The graph illustrates the information of case of influenza in human over 65 in a certain states in the UK between 1985 and 1995.
Overall
, it can be
clearly
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that, the rates of flu has fluctuated throughout the period. In mid-year the ratio of
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peole
has
moderately
increased in the Village. On the one hand, in the
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year
1985 the issues was
slightly
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grew
up around 40 of
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people
.
Also
, the line graph
rapidly
climbed up more than a half in the
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year
1987.
However
, the rates was
gradually
decreased in the
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year
1988 approximately 45 of
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people
, it was
steadily
increased from 1988 to 1989 about more than two fifths.
In addition
, the number of
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people
were rocketed
around 70 in the
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year
1990. Despite, the number of
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people
fluctuated between 61 in the
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year
1992
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before
dropping
gradually
more than half in the
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year
1995.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the reported number of case of influenza in people over 65 in a certain village in the UK from 1985 to 1995

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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