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The graph below show the amount of area used for growing grains between 1990 and 2010 in a state in Canada. Summarise the information selecting and reporting main features, and make the comparison where relevant.

The graph below show the amount of area used for growing grains between 1990 and 2010 in a state in Canada. 9Xoj
The given bar graph shows the information about the change of in Canada acres of different lands used for growing grains which are redfield, sunny valley, spring plains and others from 1990 to 2010. It can be seen that redfield shared same acres of land for growing grains in 1990 to 2000. Exactly, it was 60 acres, but it fell at around 53 acres in 2010. However, the least land was used by others in the given year. In contrast, the further information, sunny Valley and spring plains seen the deviation in areas where used for growing grains. Sunny Valley used the land below 48 in 1990. In the middle year which inclined to around 43 acres, it comes down slight at near 38 acres in 2010. Meanwhile, spring plains used 35 acres in 1990 as well as after sharp declination formed in 2000. It gone up to 22 acres in 2010. Overall, it is clear that the redfield witnessed the maximum acres of land for growing grains, while the least area showed for others.
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bar graph
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shows
the information about the
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change
of in Canada
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acres
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different
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lands
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used
for
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growing
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grains
which are
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redfield
, sunny valley, spring plains
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and others
from 1990 to 2010.

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seen
that
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redfield
shared same
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acres
of
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land
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growing
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grains
in 1990 to 2000. Exactly, it was 60
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acres
,
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but
it fell at around 53
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acres
in 2010.
However
, the least
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land
was
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used
by others in the
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given
year.

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, the
further
information, sunny Valley and spring plains
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seen
the deviation in areas where
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used
for
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growing
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grains
. Sunny Valley
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used
the
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land
below 48 in 1990. In the middle year which inclined to around 43
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acres
, it
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comes
down slight at near 38
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acres
in 2010. Meanwhile, spring plains
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used
35
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acres
in 1990
as well
as after sharp declination formed in 2000. It
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gone
up to 22
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acres
in 2010.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that the
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redfield
witnessed the maximum
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acres
of
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land
for
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growing
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grains
, while the least area
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showed
for others.
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IELTS academic The graph below show the amount of area used for growing grains between 1990 and 2010 in a state in Canada.

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175 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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