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The pie charts illustrate that how the number of people commutes to work in five different transportation ways in European city from 1959 and 2009.

The pie charts illustrate that how the number of people commutes to work in five different transportation ways in European city from 1959 and 2009. R5WAV
The pie charts illustrate that how the number of people commutes to work in five different transportation ways in European city from 1959 and 2009. Overall, the majority of people preferred to go work by walk in 1959, whereas the high percentage of people choose to commute by car in 2009 To begin with, the number of people using car is 55 per cent in 1959 and this In 1959, the number of commuters using car was about 55 percent and figures has halved in 2009, which is 25 per cent. The car users was 10 per cent in 1959 which then
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IELTS academic The pie charts illustrate that how the number of people commutes to work in five different transportation ways in European city from 1959 and 2009.

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