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The diagram below show the multi-stage production of years as can fruit

The diagram below show the multi-stage production of years as can fruit RO8M
The diagram illustrates how to produce canned fruit step by step. It is clear that there are several main steps in the process from picking of the peers to the final can product. in the first stage of the process Sarai peers are picked by hand and then transfer to the factory where pairs are washed and then check the quality under the magnified view next the defective PSR taken away and the good ones are called in store at a specified temperature then the pairs are weighted and crashed into different grains for this the pairs are built before slicing them and then there are course are also removed in the next app this code and slice pears are put in the cans and seal before before cookingfinalized dispatched to the supermarket for sale overall it can be seen that process of canning pairs is complex process involving Mary steps
The diagram illustrates how to produce canned fruit
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peers
are picked
by hand and then transfer to the factory where
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are washed
and then
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the quality under the magnified view
next
the defective PSR taken away and the
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good
ones
are called
in store at a specified temperature then the
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are weighted
and crashed into
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different
grains for this the
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pairs
are built
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slicing them and then there are course are
also
removed

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app this code and slice pears
are put
in the cans and seal
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cookingfinalized
dispatched to the supermarket for sale

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it can be
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of canning
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IELTS academic The diagram below show the multi-stage production of years as can fruit

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150 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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