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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. 8Xww

The maps provided, in general, illustrate information about the changes between 1920 at its started and today as a result of the remodelation. Overall, it is clear that while the original park had not place for great events, presently the park count with several marvellous places to have large amounts of people. Besides, the government made new areas for children for playing with their parents. According to the last situation and with the changes presented in the two maps respectively, initialy, in 1920 Graing Park had a minor capacity for doing concerts in the stage for musicians, consequently, the Amphitheatre was built to increase considerably the number of chairs for the assitants. Secondly, there is a rose garden with a breathview and chairs has been installed. After that, the designers developed a comfortable area for drinking coffee. Therefore, underground park was built that allows a major amount of vehicules to the people. In addition, glasshouse was replaced by a contemporany water feature. Finally, it was seen that the park was distributed appropriately, taking advantage of the same place.

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Therefore
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park
was distributed
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