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The line graph shows the percentage of people passing computer test in Country A over a period of 8 years

The line graph shows the percentage of people passing computer test in Country A over a period of 8 years AXGl
The line graph gives information about 2 computer test practical and theory between 2007 to 2015 the data given in percentageOverall it can be seen theory exam higher passing rate in 2007 and list passing rate in 2014 To start with 2007 to 2011 the passing ratio of theory test above 60% respectively. ON the other hand the percentage of theory test is go downl just over half in 2013/14 furthermore in 2014/15 the amount of in theory test is almost half. In addition practical test in 2007/08 exactly half respectively. in the same way the figure of passing in practice test has rise dramatically during 2008 to 2011. In contrast slide down in 2012 around 53%. also in 2013 the ratio of passing practical test is jump to 55% and next above 55% in 2014/15 practical test
The line graph gives information about 2 computer
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rate in 2014 To
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in 2007/08 exactly half
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IELTS academic The line graph shows the percentage of people passing computer test in Country A over a period of 8 years

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137 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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