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The diagram below show the design for a wave energy machine and its location.

The diagram below show the design for a wave energy machine and its location. 3a0Rb
The given diagram illustrates the mechanism of a wave-energy machine and where it is located. Overall, it can noticed that the wave energy machine helps in generating electricity through the water waves. The wave machine is designed in such a manner that as the waves are directed towards the machine making the water level in the machine to rise. Due to which the a air flow is created which makes the turbine to move in a clock wise. Then the same air is ejected out through an opening at the top of the machine at the right hand side. And through the left hand side the air once again enters the machine which leads the turbine to move in an anti clockwise motion. Then the same air flow is mainted as it moves from top chamber to the bottom one eventually into the water. The location of these wave machines play a crucial role in its output. The deeper and taller the machine with larger waves, the higher the output as compared to the smaller machines which are located in less deep water creating smaller which would lead to low output. Although the charges differ for both. The smaller machines have low installation costs compared to the taller ones.
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diagram illustrates the mechanism of a wave-energy
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machine
and where it
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.

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, it can
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noticed
that the
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wave
energy
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machine
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helps
in generating electricity through the water waves.

The
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wave
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machine
is designed
in such a manner that as the
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waves
are directed
towards the
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machine
making the water level in the
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machine
to rise. Due to which
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the a
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air
flow
is created
which
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makes
the turbine to
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move
in a clock wise. Then the same
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air
is ejected
out through an opening at the top of the
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machine
at the
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right hand
side. And through the
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left hand
side the
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air
once again enters the
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machine
which leads the turbine to
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move
in an
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anti clockwise
motion. Then the same
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air
flow is
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mainted
as it
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moves
from top chamber to the bottom one
eventually
into the water.

The location of these
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wave
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machines
play a crucial role in its output. The deeper and taller the
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machine
with larger
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waves
, the higher the output as compared to the smaller
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machines
which
are located
in less deep water creating smaller which would lead to low output. Although the charges differ for both. The smaller
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machines
have low installation costs compared to the taller ones.
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IELTS academic The diagram below show the design for a wave energy machine and its location.

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