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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much 15kxN
The given three charts illustrate the mean proportions of three potentially unhealty nutrients (sodium, saturated fat, and added sugar) that are consumed in four typical meals in the USA. In general, sodium and saturated fat are the most consumed during dinner. On the other hand, added sugar is the most consumed when eating snacks. All three types of nutrients are the least eaten during breakfast. The majority or 43 percent of the sodium intake is consumed during dinner. The next 29 percent of the consumed sodium is part of the food that is eaten during lunch. The remaining 28 percent of the sodium that is consumed is equaly eaten during breakfast and snacks. As it is the case with sodium, the majority of the saturate fat is consumed during dinner. The following 47 percent of the consumed saturated fat is roughly equally split between lunch and snacks. Meals that are eaten during breakfast contain the smallest percentage of saturated fats compared to the remaining three meals. In contrast to sodium and saturated fats, the highest percentage of added sugar is consumed while eating snacks. The dinner, lunch and breakfast meals contain 23 percent, 19 percent, and 16 percent of added sugar respectivelly.
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unhealty
nutrients (sodium,
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saturated
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fat
, and
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added
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sugar)
that are
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consumed
in four typical meals in the USA.

In general
, sodium and
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saturated
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fat
are the most
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consumed
during
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dinner
.
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,
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added
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sugar
is the most
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consumed
when eating snacks. All three types of nutrients are the least
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eaten
during breakfast.

The majority or 43
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of the sodium intake is
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consumed
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dinner
. The
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29
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sodium is part of the food
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eaten
during lunch.

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The
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equaly
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eaten
during breakfast and snacks.

As it is the case with sodium, the majority of
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the saturate
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is
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dinner
. The following 47
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is roughly
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Meals that are
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during breakfast contain the smallest percentage of
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saturated
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fats
compared to the remaining three meals.
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to sodium and
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saturated
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fats
, the highest percentage of
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added
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sugar
is
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consumed
while eating snacks. The
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dinner
, lunch and breakfast meals contain 23
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, 19
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percent
, and 16
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percent
of
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added
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sugar
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respectivelly
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IELTS academic The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much

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