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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much yX7BV
Tine diagrams illustrate the average proportions of three types of nutrients in typical meals, which can be unhealthy if consumed too much. The three types include sodium, saturated fats and added sugar. The data is taken from the United States of America. The first chart shows the average percentages of sodium. Dinner contains the most sodium (43%). Breakfast and snacks include an equal proportion of sodium consumed, with each of them adding up 14% of sodium. Through eating lunch, 29% sodium is consumed. The second chart shows the percentages of saturated fat in meals. By eating dinner, 37% saturated fat is consumed. Lunch contributes to a consumption of 26% saturated fat, followed by snacks with 21% and breakfast with 16%. The last chart illustrates the proportions of added sugar. Snacks contain the highest amount of added sugar (42%). Dinner includes 23%. A typical dinner includes 23% added sugar, while lunch contains 19% and breakfast includes 16%. All in all, the diagrams show that every typical meal consumed in the USA contains a percentage of at least l4% of nutrients that can be unhealthy if eaten too much.
Tine diagrams illustrate the average proportions of three types of nutrients in typical meals, which can be unhealthy if
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consumed
too much. The three types
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sodium,
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saturated
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fats
and
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added
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sugar
. The data
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The
first
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shows
the average percentages of sodium.
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Dinner
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contains
the most sodium (43%). Breakfast and snacks
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include
an equal proportion of sodium
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consumed
, with each of them adding up 14% of sodium. Through eating lunch, 29% sodium is
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consumed
. The second chart
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shows
the percentages of
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saturated
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fat
in meals. By eating
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dinner
, 37%
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saturated
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fat
is
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consumed
. Lunch contributes to a consumption of 26%
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saturated
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fat
, followed by snacks with 21% and breakfast with 16%. The last chart illustrates the proportions of
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added
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sugar
. Snacks
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contain
the highest amount of
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added
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sugar
(42%).
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Dinner
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includes
23%. A typical
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dinner
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includes
23%
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added
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sugar
, while lunch
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contains
19% and breakfast
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includes
16%. All in all, the diagrams
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show
that every typical meal
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consumed
in the USA
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contains
a percentage of at least l4% of nutrients that can be unhealthy if eaten too much.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much

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